Friday, September 25, 2015

Yes & No.. haiku..

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Haiku Horizons
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Between yes and no
exist invisible cracks; 
nothing smooth for thoughts


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nothing smooth for thoughts; 
she keeps falling in this space 
between yes and no



RS:)


14 comments:

  1. Being stuck in traffic is a good time to meditate.

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  2. "between yes and no" - that is a classic position for many people. well penned!

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  3. so what was the final verdict? :-) lovely one, RS :-)

    here's mine:

    http://drishti.co/2015/09/28/a-thing-of-beauty-is-a-joy-forever/

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  4. A difficult space to find oneself in. Excellent haiku !

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  5. I like how you coupled these haiku .. nicely done! Bastet

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  6. great......invisible cracks.....liked it....

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  7. Ah to be stuck with a maybe...love your haiku series...surely makes us wonder where we stand in situations like this...I am the queen of procrastination.

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  8. Theses are great together! Nice job!

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  9. Yes, in the crack one is stuck with "maybe". Good one!

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  10. I have been in that space more often than I care to think.

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  11. Well, sometimes maybe is the only option. Aking a pause to think is a good thing.

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  12. Well, sometimes maybe is the only option. Aking a pause to think is a good thing.

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  13. my grand daughter (she will be three this month) uses the 'maybe' quite efficiently to try to get her own way



    much love...

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