Friday, January 17, 2014

Oh, My Words Shiver.. Haiku


Haiku My Heart



Oh, My Words Shiver..


Oh, my words shiver,
I look for the warmth of Moon;
river of light flows...

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River of light flows;
dry leafs quietly sheds 
a white sheet of snow

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A white sheet of snow,
I try to carve a haiku;
oh, my words shiver...


RS:)

I took the first one from the chain of haiku I wrote for 3WW...

10 comments:

  1. Words shiver opens many thoughts!!!

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  2. Enjoyed them - especially the last.

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  3. The second one is gorgeous! What a vivid picture I got of the cascading snow!

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  4. Nice poetry! I bet last night's full moon inspired you??

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  5. nicely crafted; have a nice Friday

    much love..

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  6. I always enjoy the progression of your haiku!! This is especially vivid today as the temp outside is 20 degrees!!!! Have a grand weekend! Cathy

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  7. Your words wrap around themselves beautifully Ramesh… may their warmth comfort the shivering.

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  8. A shivering word is MUCH better than a dead word, my friend! ;)

    Seven Spirits

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