Friday, December 20, 2013

Gift of Winter - Haiku



Written for 



Rebecca's 
Haiku My Heart

and 

Leo's Haiku Heights



GIFT OF WINTER

a happy cascade of Haiku


Ah, wary earth
moves  away from Sun;
she is real cold

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She is real cold;
sun tries to warm her with the 
gift of winter  

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Gift of winter;
Christmas time glitters with a 
star studded sky

*

Star studded sky;
smiles, joy, dance, songs , Santa and
a happy earth

**

A happy earth;
sunbeams carry blessings from
heavenly Gods

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Heavenly Gods
descend on earth to celebrate;
drops of hope rain

**

Drops of hope rain;
she gathers them in her palms
and says, "Thank you!!!"



RS :)


21 comments:

  1. and says, "Thank you!!!"
    for all blessings
    asked and unasked.

    cascading into a beautiful haiku. loved it RS.

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  2. Drops of hope rain;
    she gathers them in her palms
    and says, "Thank you!!!" so beautiful Ramesh!

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  3. Gathering drops of hope......I am.

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  4. Oh I do love your drops of hope! Enjoy this wonderful season!

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  5. Thank you :)
    Here to practice happiness.

    After a long time I see this space and it looks like the same life giving river, glittering, sparkling, inviting, soothing; looks like it is where it was, doing what it did, but she is moving and has touched millions by now with her magic water, the potion of life, the window view to keys of happiness.

    Regards
    RM

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    1. RM... You are a very kind soul...thanks for your beautiful thoughts and a flawless flowing expression....

      God bless!!!

      RS

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  6. The last line says it all. "and says 'thank you'"

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  7. Flawless and honest. One of the best I have read so far :)
    http://ayusheeghoshal.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-haiku.html

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  8. Lovely Ramesh.. So aptly described :)

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  9. Awesome !! All Haiku are splendid.

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  10. Very nice use of pattern, I especially love the line "drops of hope rain."

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  11. I love your cascade Ramesh, Thank YOU! and a very Merry Christmas to you.

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  12. A delightful cascade of priceless gifts, fabulously done as always RS:)

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  13. What a fabulous and thankful cascade. Well done.

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  14. A beautiful cascade ... loved the lines :-)

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  15. These cascading haiku are so fun to read!

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