Saturday, June 9, 2012

Rainbow in Her Eyes..

Written for Leo's Haiku Heights


Prompt: Ordinary ...but then the word itself isn't..

Rainbow in Her Eyes..


Rainbow in her eyes;
much more than ordinary
touch of artistry

touch of artistry;
a rain drop silently cuts
the shining sunbeam

the shining sunbeam;
extra-ordinary splash of
colours create music

colours create music
and she dances lost in love;
beautiful world this

Beautiful world this
with nothing ordinary;
rainbow in her eyes

 

RS:)

PROMPT IS A SURPRISE FROM LEO...IT'S NOT
MY PROMPT AS SOME FRIENDS HAVE EXPRESSED..

Shared with Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart..

17 comments:

  1. Well the prompt is perfect for your blog..ha..ha...

    Lovely cascading haiku...I like the rainbow in her eyes ~

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  2. Grace, the prompt was provided by Ramesh Sir itself.. undoubtedly it's perfect.. haha...

    Beautiful set Ramesh ji.. i felt like being the girl from ur haiku..dancing in love...
    My fav lines are-
    'a rain drop silently cuts
    the shining sunbeam'
    Just beautiful! :)

    P.S. I ve changed the theme of my blog. Pls let me know if there is problem in loading now! :) Thanks for being so patient!

    Painting heart with hope.

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    1. Thanks Pranita... Nooooooooooooooooo prompt wasn't mine.. I created the set only after HH announced.. I repeat..not my prompt please.. It's Leo's.. thanks for your comments..and change of theme.. it may be helpful..

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  3. I could see rainbows!, and haiku is eye stuck, Ramesh sir, thank you for extraordinary theme!

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  4. These are not ordinary. I think when we can see beauty in the ordinary, we can be a happy person. A delight always to read your romantic haiku.

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  5. your passion about life is so evident in this gorgeous cascading set....you are so very talented....

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  6. a drop from Her eyes
    fallen in light; simply
    extraordinary

    I like the cascade, RSji :) not my form of choice, I guess you know that :D but you are adept at it. A tribute to mother nature, this. That's what I felt.

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  7. This is amazingly crafted sir of course you suggested the prompt and have beautifully crafted each set doing justice to the prompt :) I couldn't choose any one set, loved all of them entirely.. love gleaming bright aura of the girl you crafted in the haiku :):):

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  8. Colors can be a catalyst to good music. Rainbows somehow create the connection to make colors and music blend. Great cascades, Ramesh and great haiku!

    Hank

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  9. Wow!....Very delightful haiku.....LOved it!!...Very true concluding lines....

    Beautiful world this
    with nothing ordinary;
    rainbow in her eyes

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  10. Uplifting cascade of color and inspiration. Thank you, Ramesh!

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  11. Interesting composed and I love that the first and last line are same :)

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  12. Absolutely loving cascading haiku ~ Wonderful! ~ I feel the love ^_^ ~ thanks, (A Creative Harbor)

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  13. Lovely composition indeed! I also liked "a rain drop silently cuts the shining sunbeam" :)

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  14. Beautiful words and haiku, wonderful flow.

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  15. Very beautiful and romantic haiku :)

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  16. Such a beautiful combination of music, art, colors... i wish to see the rainbow in her eyes Ramesh Ji. you write this form of cascading haiku so so well; i simply love reading them :)

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