Saturday, June 16, 2012

I Look At Nature..



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Prompt: Wisdom

I Look At Nature

Wisdom scattered
everywhere, all around, ah;
I look at nature

I look at nature;
winds just tickle fresh leaves,
dry ones take a fall

Dry ones take a fall;
shadows of tall trees lengthen
as sun sinks slowly

As sun sinks slowly
birds begin to return home;
Moon appears in sky

Moon appears in sky
without stealing sun’s glory;
flowers go to sleep

Flowers go to sleep,
butterflies evade darkness;
wisdom scattered..



RS:)


15 comments:

  1. Lovely drops of wisdom scattered by nature ~

    Nice cascading lines ~

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  2. Your haiku
    makes me think of the waves of the sea washing a beach
    so flowing.

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  3. The nature indeed scattered wisdom all around.. Once again a hats off ob done RS sir :)

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  4. Nice one...Liked the connecting lines

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  5. I felt like i was in a beautiful park, and then the sun set and the moon came out....content and peaceful....

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  6. Bravo: a beautiful chain.
    (leaves, not leafs!)

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  7. Thanks Viv.. you did well by bringing it to my knowledge..I have made the correction...

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  8. people say wisdom comes with age, you showed how we can learn from nature, like the way you look at it :)

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  9. Nice one, Sood Ji! as usual.

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  10. So much Wisdom in your lines .Really enjoyed reading this :-)

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  11. I loved the way you combined each stanza with the next...loved your work Sir :-)

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  12. nature the best source of wisdom... as it is scattered some here and some there...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/wisdom-haiku-june-18-2012.html

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  13. Nice haiku sir .. full of wisdom ..:P

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  14. Nature can teach us wise ways, if we have eyes to see and ears to hear.

    Gathering Wisdom

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