Friday, May 11, 2012

I Remove My Mask

Written for Leo's Haiku Heights..
(shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..)


Prompt: Mask

I Remove My Mask..

I remove
my mask finally;
God smiles

***

Her eyes
show me my real self;
myths shatter

***

She is calm;
a better me smiles
back at me

RS :)


Claude LOPEZ-GINISTY May 12, 2012 1:54 AM

Deep and beautiful: I felt the urge to translate them into French!
Thank you

J'enlève
mon masque finalement;
Dieu sourit

Ses yeux
me montrent mon vrai moi;
les mythes s'effondrent

Elle est calme;
un meilleur moi
me rend mon sourire


Thank You, Claude..for your kindness.. .. Ramesh Sood 


19 comments:

  1. Simple and beautiful... the last one esp...! :) Wishing loads of smiles your way...
    Truth likes to travel bare feet

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  2. That's very deep Ramesh. I like I remove my mask.

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  3. Read it twice..still lot of thoughts fighting..just 1 word- brilliant..

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  4. Removing one's mask is difficult for some! Thank you for sharing! :)

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  5. Simple words .. but at the same time effective words ...

    Anu :)

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  6. Deep and beautiful: I felt the urge to translate them into French!
    Thank you


    J'enlève
    mon masque finalement;
    Dieu sourit

    Ses yeux
    me montrent mon vrai moi;
    les mythes s'effondrent

    Elle est calme;
    un meilleur moi
    me rend mon sourire

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  7. I am so very thankful to you Claude..hope friends from France will cherish..love your gesture..a true giver, You..

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    1. I live in tiny Switzerland where part of the country also speaks French!

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    2. A dream destination Claude... I have only seen your country in Indian Movies..how beautiful..May you continue to be as joyful as ever..

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    3. Dear Ramesh,

      When Indians shoot movies (Bollywood types of movies), they do it most of the time in my region, 2 miles from my home!

      Have a nice w/e!
      Claude

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  8. Very beautiful...I specially like the last one ~

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  9. Good day Ramesh, what a wonderful triplet of haiku. I loved reading these. I especially liked the second one. It has a deeper spiritual meaning. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  10. ...a better me smiles back at me ~ delightful ~ Excellent haiku as usual ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  11. What a treat Ramesh! I din't know you knew French. I hope to understand this beautiful language someday. Lovely haiku!!

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  12. Love the first one! Of course, God can see through our masks, but this is about being honest with ourselves.

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  13. Lovely, Ramesh, especially the last one. And how beautiful they are in French!

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  14. Beautiful set of haiku...I loved all three ...equally!

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