Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Leaf Trembles...


Written for 3WW - A Haiku


Prompts: Tremble, Dampen, Keep


Oh, wet winds
dampen the spirit;
leaf trembles

Leaf trembles;
she keeps her window
wide open...


RS:)

8 comments:

  1. Oh how I wish I could write such wondeful haiku and incorporate the three words as well as you. Nice job.

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  2. How beautifully you used all three words! :) Very nice...

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  3. You make the storm and the season so attractive.

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  4. Oh, I like this very much---especially the wet winds and the open windows. I can almost feel the droplets blowing against my face.

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  5. "She keeps her window wide open". THAT IS THE BEST EVER!

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  6. wonderfully written, Rameshji..!! :)

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