Thursday, May 3, 2012

Dark Alleys Won't Scare..

Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart...


Dark Alleys Won't Scare..

Ah, she waits
in a dark alley;
headlights blink

Fake smile grows;
covering her soul
she steps in

A dark night
gives hope of a  day
children wait

dark alleys
won't scare any more;
Ah, she waits..

RS:)

Broad day light;
I choose to write a
dark haiku..

12 comments:

  1. not even your precious moon appeared to lighten your haiku, but your love within remains loyal and present ready to rise.

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  2. gone is the fear ~ you are moving on ~ lovely haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. A beautiful touching short story....

    Took my breath away...

    Covering her soul she steps in.....and no darkness can touch the soul.. the luminiscent soul..

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  4. such sadness...the world is filled with it.

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  5. I guess you do what you have to do for the children... Nicely written.

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  6. achingly dark, yet so well written.. it has beauty..

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  7. Dont we all have the fake smile at times?! Beautifully written!

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  8. Sad and beautiful at the same time.

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  9. Dark haiku indeed, but truly wonderful!

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