Saturday, May 12, 2012

Cuts on Heart..




CRIMSON HAIKU..
 Written for One Single Impression..



Cuts on heart
make love flow freely;
crimson gleams


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Crimson clouds
crave for one last glimpse;
setting Sun..



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He wears
crimson just like hers;
first blush




RS:)
 
 

12 comments:

  1. Beautiful Haiku. I love the last one most, making me guess who will make the first move!

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  2. Wow! Amazing haiku! The second one is my favourite!!! All of them are nicely done!!!

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  3. How beautiful... Crimson is the sky, looking lazily at the memories of the previous nights party, of the glittering stars n the gorgeous alluring moon

    The words work like the birds above a vast sea..that promise an island nearby....a liveable place some where.
    Warm, cozy, Bright

    Regards
    RM

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  4. Wow, "cuts on heart...", just superb!

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  5. I love the first one. I can relate to it well.

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  6. Good Haiku form. I prefer the second image. Nature and Haiku are synonomous.

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  7. Beautiful set....I loved the second one on nature :)

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  8. Love the first one the best. The other 2 are my other favorites!

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  9. beautiful.. i love d 3rd one ... !!

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