Thursday, April 26, 2012

She Refuses ...

April 27, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge



Prompt: Temptation


Temptations;
she refuses to
dig his past


RS:)

haiku;
 don't hold temptation,
 comment.

20 comments:

  1. haiku;
    don't hold temptation,
    comment.

    I loved this...
    Coz i wonder why people are so reluctant to comment!!!!

    Nice one....

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  2. "tempted" to comment:), good piece of poetry again sir!

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  3. Kudos to this thought! Really.. Digging into the past of someone close to you is extremely tempting.. Resisting takes a whole lot of efforts and strength to hold yourslf back!

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  4. She refuses to dig past, yes true example of temptation, it really happens so..

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  5. I agree that its tempting to dig someone pasts...but it most of the times hurts to those whose past is being dug...
    great thought... :)

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  6. Very nice first haiku: there is more than one way to read it.

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  7. Wow... loved the way ur 2nd haiku tempts to comment .. enjoyed both:-) ...n y surrender for such temptations when there are better temptations! ...

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    1. Its smart tat she refuses!..


      PS: published before I could complete ...well gave on my temptation to fully comment:-) ..
      enjoyed..thank u

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  8. Kudos to this thought! Really.. Digging into the past of someone close to you is extremely tempting.. Resisting takes a whole lot of efforts and strength to hold yourslf back!

    Rosy lips of temptation - A Haiku

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  9. I never hold back to comment..he..he... I like your take on this temptation ~

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  10. I liked both of your haiku today. The second temptation I can handle - the first would be more difficult :-)

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  11. Because she does not
    want to know the truth it will
    spoil the temptation:)

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  12. Love the ambiguity of "dig" in the last line.

    Richard

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  13. Trying to tempt her imagination too!! :)

    Happy weekend, Ramesh!
    Day 27 ~~ My Diet's Expiration

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