Thursday, April 26, 2012

Stars Fall, Sun Rises...


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
and shared with Haiku Heights..





Tempted stars
fall for lovely earth;
Sun rises..


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Temptation
to pluck the flower;
she plucks it


 
withering
 flower loses smile;
she has it..



RS:)

19 comments:

  1. I especially like your first Haiku. Offers hope!!! Have a wonderful day! Cathy

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  2. yes remesh....today your beautiful haiku make the sunrise!

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  3. forgive me ramesh i typed so quickly i entered an e where an a was needed!!!

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  4. Are the cycle of us and a flower. Nice one.

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  5. Beautiful set! I liked the second one as I could relate to it....If I see any beautiful flower, I want it in my hand...

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  6. Lovely haiku! I try not to pick the flowers.

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  7. what a great last line, a surprise!

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  9. Between she plucks it and she has it.. i could see/ feel a range of emothions thoughts and life experiences.. i loved this set RS, especially the tempted stars falling for earth...the sun must be the luckiest one then !

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  10. lovely images.....sad about the plucked and withered flower..

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  11. So beautiful, and pleasant link spring's pleasant flowers...:)

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  12. beautiful...no easy choice, to pluck or just admire as it is.

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  13. This is flirty and romantic...temptation to pluck the flower; she plucks it.

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  14. 'daisies don't tell' ~ lovely nature haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  15. Ah, I feel as though I experienced this with you--and with she.

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  16. I love the story you tell in your haiku... again, you amaze me with your talent. Enjoy your weekend!

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  17. This is just so lovely... from star to smile... thank you!

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