Friday, April 13, 2012

Lonely Fairy Tale..

April 14, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..



Prompt: Aura

Lonely Fairy Tale..

She clings to
her made-up aura ;
lone twosome

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Just a hint
and her aura melts;
fairy tale..


RS:)

18 comments:

  1. lovely Haiku RS...loved the 2nd one...awesome... :)

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  2. Deep as always!!! I liked the idea of the melting aura in the second one!!! Thanks!

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  3. Beautiful...! 'lone twosome' - amazingly said! :)

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  4. Perhaps she's the ice maiden!

    N ice ly!!

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  5. I like your haiku today. My favourite is the second one. "and her aura melts" Thank you.

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  6. It only takes a hint to make Andy's ice maiden melt:)

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  7. "her aura melts"...i like this. thanks for sharing!

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  8. Nice intriguing lines ~ I like made-up aura ~

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  9. Nice. Is a fantasy life better than no life at all?

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  10. Wow!...Lovely haiku...2nd one is amazing!

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  11. speaks to the illusion of it all ~ well written as usual Ramesh ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  12. Beautiful words like flowers of spring reflecting the aura of Haiku heights..

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  13. both tell a story harmonisously so I like them both they blend nicely!

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  14. Nice, Ramesh!! makeup aura and aura melt!
    Thank you for visiting Day 14 ~~ Aura's Band

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  15. You deeply know the "feminine" you write about.

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  16. Beautiful and mysterious--perfect for the prompt! :D

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