Friday, April 20, 2012

Lips find Perfect Curve..



Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..



Smile, my beloved
and tears are my friends;
inseparable

***

I keep listening
to hope of empty promise;
a heavier heart

***

A heavier heart
quietly flows out of my eyes;
lips find perfect curve..



RS:)


12 comments:

  1. I think the first one is my favorite. Really well done. It says a lot in so few words...

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  2. Like the perfect curve also ~ very creative haiku ~thanks for sharing, namaste, ^_^ ~ linked w/Haiku My Heart

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  3. thank you ramesh for your ability to write words with an inspired heart. you are a painter of boundless soul beauty.

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  4. May your heart lighten,
    promises become fulfilled,
    smile be a constant.

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  5. The last Haiku, very heart-breaking! Very touchy this one.. Felt the joy and pain throughout! Very well done Ramesh ji :)

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  6. I like the whole set as well, Ramesh and I am reminded of Kahlil Gibran's A Tear and A Smile. Lovely words and yes so very true. They are inseparable. I like your picture :)
    Namaste,
    Noelle

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  7. I always know I will find words here--like zen koan. Sensuous today.

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  8. You are a master of meaning and magical words.

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  9. The first is my favorite too. Beautifully said

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