Join me in practising Happiness!!!
Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
OMG! That's so beautiful... a short Haiku, but said it all.. So true... we hold on to our beloved ones till the last breath... til that moment, they're still so alive!
Wow! So much truth and wisdom in your haiku!
This must mean something special to you. Your mother perhaps ?
In few words you conveyed a lot of meaning ! This was just beautiful :-)
This creates a vivid picture of who she was and how she lived.
These words are so powerful. They show the transition from what was to what is.
This says so much iin so few words. Like a last sigh.
I love your brief haiku - the essence of the spirit of haiku to say so much in a nutshell.
How can you express it Rameshji...incredible! life and death, between is last moment which is only alive
Simple words with so much deep meaning.....Awesome!
Short and sweet and penetrating on the thoughts! Great write Ramesh!Hank
nice and tightalive on subway senryu
Was...and now is...not...“More Dead Than Alive”
I came back for this ...twice today...there is a power i feel of expression , in the eyes.. who see life like this ..
Oh, you areso pure a soul;gracious..RS:)
To all my friends who visit me..I can only humbly express my gratitude.. you all are shining souls..true givers.. Thank You!!!RS:)
Beautiful and powerful.Richard
simply WOW... :)