Saturday, April 14, 2012

Last Breath..

April 15, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..


Prompt: Alive..


last breath;
ah, she was so
alive..



RS:)

18 comments:

  1. OMG! That's so beautiful... a short Haiku, but said it all.. So true... we hold on to our beloved ones till the last breath... til that moment, they're still so alive!

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  2. Wow! So much truth and wisdom in your haiku!

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  3. This must mean something special to you. Your mother perhaps ?

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  4. In few words you conveyed a lot of meaning ! This was just beautiful :-)

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  5. This creates a vivid picture of who she was and how she lived.

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  6. These words are so powerful. They show the transition from what was to what is.

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  7. This says so much iin so few words. Like a last sigh.

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  8. I love your brief haiku - the essence of the spirit of haiku to say so much in a nutshell.

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  9. How can you express it Rameshji...incredible! life and death, between is last moment which is only alive

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  10. Simple words with so much deep meaning.....Awesome!

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  11. Short and sweet and penetrating on the thoughts! Great write Ramesh!

    Hank

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  12. I came back for this ...twice today...there is a power i feel of expression , in the eyes.. who see life like this ..

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    1. Oh, you are
      so pure a soul;
      gracious..

      RS:)

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  13. To all my friends who visit me..I can only humbly express my gratitude.. you all are shining souls..true givers.. Thank You!!!

    RS:)

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