Practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku & Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow...and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW..
Excellent first haiku sir, nice!
First one... too good Ramesh ji...! Felt like you wrote it on me!
3-5-3 is amazing one to express..loved both.
amazing second one ..
a still haiku...remains forever in timethree still haiku and-senryu
With very little words, you have expressed so much thing with just one word. :) I Liked it.
Wonderful haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
I like the first one...still, I like the second one ~
I love the "still haiku" image.
Both excellent. Clouds are bursting here as I write!
1st one was lovely...beautifully written... :)
Both are lovely!
Wonderful take, Ramesh ji :)
Love these STILL haiku Ramesh.
Nice use of 3-5-3! :)Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows
What a startling juxtaposition: still mind/clouds burst.How can this be?Anything is possible in poetry!“Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”