Saturday, April 21, 2012

I Write A Still Haiku




April 22, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge

 
Prompt : Still
 
  
She sits
with  mind still;
clouds burst

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I write
a still haiku;
feel it..



RS:)

16 comments:

  1. Excellent first haiku sir, nice!

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  2. First one... too good Ramesh ji...! Felt like you wrote it on me!

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  3. 3-5-3 is amazing one to express..loved both.

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  4. With very little words, you have expressed so much thing with just one word. :) I Liked it.

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  5. Wonderful haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. I like the first one...still, I like the second one ~

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  7. Both excellent. Clouds are bursting here as I write!

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  8. 1st one was lovely...beautifully written... :)

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  9. Wonderful take, Ramesh ji :)

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  10. What a startling juxtaposition: still mind/clouds burst.

    How can this be?

    Anything is possible in poetry!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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