Sunday, April 15, 2012

Being You...



April 16, 2012
Written for Haiku Heights
April Challenge..

 
Prompt: Being..
 
 
Upset?
I am just
   being you...


RS:)

19 comments:

  1. Being someone to let them know who they are...great Haiku...its really thought provoking... :)

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  2. Wow... that was intense... My parents used to do that... They would behave like me sometimes, and at the end if i got angry or irritated, they would tel me that's how they feel when i behave the same way! The best way of teaching life's lessons! :)

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  3. @ Cynasore
    @ Pranita

    Can you think a bit more deeply...or I will like you to read more comments from those who have a little more experience in living..so that you will see what you are missing.. here..

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  4. it all comes to consoling oneself, no matter how many loving ones there are. maybe like,you were saying, he is me,another you! so you have got two you's and double the medicine for pain. im not sure.

    or it may be that "upset? i share your pain too"..

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  5. what kind of Haiku is this? I know the one with 17 syllables?

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  6. We are all 'mirrors' to each other ~ well expressed ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  7. Spot on Ramesh! Some never realized how hurting their words or actions are to others until these boomeranged back to them. Great haiku write!

    Hank

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  8. Elegant!

    Being you
    connected we
    All are one

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  9. Oh, wow. That's a direct shot I suspect was a long time coming. Powerful.

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  10. Experiencing your pain. is it? I got this meaning, deepest ever with fewest words.

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  11. Very deep and thought provoking haiku!!! Awesome!

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  12. The trouble is, we can never truly know what's going on inside another person. Empathy, sympathy, understanding - all imperfect skills.

    PS I so much sppreciate that you turned off those horrid catchpa things.

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  13. Awesome. So less words with such a deep meaning. Wonderfully composed Ramesh.

    Namaste

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  14. Wow...this can be used as a quote at times....:D
    Beautifully penned

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  15. So small... So cute.. Yet so intense and has great depths!!! Kudos

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  16. Wow how many of us do this without even realizing we do it? You have tapped into humane nature at its barest, the emotions we use to reach another person, well written!

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