Saturday, February 4, 2012

Yellow Flowers...






Also sharing with One Single Impression... thanks to Leo for prompt : Sour Grapes..


Yellow Flowers...

Just opposite
on neighbor’s roof bloom smiles;
yellow flowers

yellow flowers;
ebullient butterfly
strikes a chord

Strikes a chord
ignoring unworthy rose;
Sour grapes..


 
This last Haiku is in response to OSI prompt
but weaved in here in appreciation of the effort made by SiS
 
RS :)

12 comments:

  1. I like the idea of a chain of accrostic senryu. And your joyful spirit comes through

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  2. Very nicely put together. No sour grapes from me.

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  3. Nice triplet of haiku/senryu Ramesh. I especially like the first and second one.

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  4. Acrostic haiku and nisaiku combined (if I'm not wrong). This requires a lot of effort but you make it look so easy!
    Loved them! :)

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  5. You are becoming an adept weaver of words, Ramesh, with each strand leading to the next!

    Not Acrostic, but My Choice!

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  6. Hi Remesh ~~ Wonderful chain, I can just see those pretty yellow flowers. No wonder the butterfly picked that way. I am also thinking the butterfly is yellow, perhaps a Monarch?
    ..

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  7. Acrostic haiku and nisaiku combined (if I'm not wrong). This requires so much effort but you make it look so easy! Nice! :)

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  8. Another fine job with the challenge -- always filled with joy and delight! Thank you for sharing!

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  9. I love the way the three progress until the very last thought in the last line. Wonderfully composed haiku.

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  10. Rameshji, Thank you so much for this Acrostic Haiku..Loved it so much and Happy Man..

    Someone is Special

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