Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Let Your Spirit Glow..

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 -
16 – February 16th – Theme or Word: Sin
Form: Haibun



Ah, getting trusted
and then choosing betrayal;
mind sins sans soul..

Whenever I find someone putting all his trust in me; taking me around the darker corners of his inner-space, I have always felt that at that moment I am receiving the greatest compliment: “You are trusted.” But, how difficult it is to hold on to someone’s secret. Sometimes it becomes difficult but then that is the test. If you succumb and share the same with another then one thing is sure: Pleasure of being a trust worthy person will be lost.
Mind will be committing a Sin of Heart.
Soul would be absent in those dark moments..
Temptation will be greater when betraying someone would mean some material gain for you. But then, a part of your spirit would die. Getting trusted is a glowing tribute anyone can ever get. Let your spirit glow. Be trustworthy. God bless!    (150)

RS:)

14 comments:

  1. Mind will be committing a Sin of Heart.
    Soul would be absent in those dark moments..

    Golden words!
    Evil things are wrapped with pretty ribbons,aren't they?
    And the Haiku has a lovely message.

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  2. be trustworthy.. Loved our message Rameshji..

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  3. Yes, it is difficult to carry on a secret. Trust is precious ~

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  4. Trust is priceless...wonderful message

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  5. Secrets shared are secrets to hide within your inner space. Good job on this challenge Ramesh. Nice haiku.

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  6. Being trusted is a heavy responsibility. Great message.

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  7. Lofty thoughts brilliantly conveyed in a haiku!

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  8. Be trustworthy, there's nothing more you can do!
    Well presented!

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  9. I'm sure you're totally trustworthy.

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  10. I loved this! A part of your spirit dies when you betray someone! Very nicely written! And the haiku is too good!

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  11. Trust is such a precious gift or bond ... delicate yet strong ... it should be guarded.

    Thank you for sharing, Ramesh!

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  12. Trust and betrayal seem to be all-too-common themes in this world.

    Wedding Day: Haibun

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  13. Beautiful..........

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