Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Her Dancing Feet..


Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image...


Photo Clicked by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography





Reflection
of a shining soul;
her dancing feet..

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Her dancing feet
make the world standstill;
frozen moments..

RS :)

17 comments:

  1. The second line has a glowing sensitivity that lingers through the second haiku!

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  2. :-) I got a little alarmed when I saw Day 22... :-) even as I admired the haiku and the photograph! Phew! :-)
    Very nice, Ramesh!

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  3. One could fell in love with such feet!! Very nicely crafted haiku.

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  4. I particularly like the second one!

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  5. the second..a beautiful frozen moment!

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  6. My favorite is the second although both paint a lovely picture of the dancer.

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  7. You have found the essence of haiku.

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  8. Love the line "make the world standstill" Really this is a nice haiku. The second verse I adore.

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  9. LOVE love love it, Ramesh!! Well done!
    Here is my Day 22.

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  10. I like the tension between dancing feet and standing still. Nice juxtaposition of images!


    Painted Images here and here

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  11. Your words create a beautiful image to compliment a beautiful picture

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  12. Great creation of tension with the stillness and the dance.

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  13. Her dancing feet
    make the world standstill;
    frozen moments..

    Nicely done!

    I'm sure I commented here earlier, I must have pressed the wrong button!

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