Monday, April 11, 2011

Haiku for Jingle's Poetry Potluck..



My Moon Haiku for Jingle's Poetry Potluck..

Theme:  Survival

Moon smiles, doesn’t fear
Extinction like Earth, none has
Inhabited yet..



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Heart quakes , sunami
Attacks shores of eyes, dreams sink
 I survive to smile..



by: RS :)




9 comments:

  1. I love that moon smile! Hopefully we won't go back there and make it cry :)

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  2. fantastic.. the second one is simple and packed with emotions..

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  3. good message and great thoughts ramesh.. mines here~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/natures-gravity/

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  4. wow,

    survive to smile,
    so cool sentiments.

    superb Haikus.

    A++

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  5. Both are lovely. I especially like the first.

    And thanks so much for participating in this week's Limerick-Off!

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  6. Brilliant Haikus, Ramesh.

    Unique perception. :-)

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  7. I enjoyed this haiku very much and appreciate your sharing it. Have a lovely day.

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