Thursday, January 20, 2011

Now That I Have Woken Up..

Ah, got late but then here I am..love to be part of 3WW

Written for 3WW Wednesday
Prompts: Surreal, Descent, Kill

Now That I Have Woken Up..


Caught in surreal
Inevitable descent,
When dreams Kill

It’s good thing about
Imagination
I can dream anew
And create a clearer
Image of a laughing
World around
Ascending again
To a happier unmasked reality
I know I will sleep well,
Now that I have woken up..


10 comments:

  1. You did do it late this time around RS, but you have done a remarkable job.

    "I can dream anew
    And create a clearer
    Image of a laughing
    World around"

    Most positive lines and ends even more beautifully!!

    "I know I will sleep well,
    Now that I have woken up.."

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  2. Great life affirming words. Excellent ending.

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  3. A very nice poem indeed, enjoyed it!

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  4. That was really lovely. I like the idea of a happier unmasked reality.

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  5. Your daydreams are so much better than your nightmares. I enjoyed reading about both.

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  6. you've really summed up best why it is so fun to dream.

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  7. it is alwayz a pleasure to pass thru and read your latest post... uplifted wings of magical notes...

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  8. What a great line - that you can sleep well once you have woken up..that's really made me think Ramesh..thank you..Jae

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